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The line art looks careful and thought out, not to mention your shading is splendid. The colors in your background complement the couple nicely and the outline seems to almost hold them together. The warm colors in your background also give the drawing a warm, fuzzy feeling that tie nicely into the subject matter. I've always had a soft spot for traditional art, so seeing something so carefully drawn and colored is absolutely refreshing. You should definitely continue to practice your skills in traditional media, I think you have a lot of potential to become a fantastic artist with the skills you have now.
In terms of improvement, Roxas' eye is a bit of a focal point. My eyes keep coming back to his own. What you might keep in mind, for another piece like this in the future, is to add some blue elsewhere so that there is a balance to the piece. An example would have been that you could have put some cool colors in the shadows of their skin. This would have created a nice balance in colors and i'm sure it wouldn't have detracted from the warm fuzzy feeling of the piece.
But alas, this is quite wonderful. I'm attracted to many aspects of this piece, the subject and technique being just a few of many. Thanks for drawing this and please continue to draw more!
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